“Sometimes all a girl really needed was a very bad idea.”
The Hawthorne Legacy is the second of four in Jennifer Lynne Barnes’ series: The Inheritance Games. It picks up after Avery, a seemingly normal teenage girl from New England, inherits the fortune of a Texas billionaire with no explanation as to why. By the end of the first book, Avery has moved into the Hawthorne’s mansion, now technically hers, found herself at the center of a love triangle with the grandsons of her bequeather, and made it to the end of an elaborate puzzle left for herself and the Hawthornes.
In The Hawthorne Legacy, Avery has to face the complicated relationship she has with her father, who has made every attempt to steal her fortune, including murder. She grapples with the possibility that he may not even be her father. This set Avery and the Hawthorne grandsons–Grayson, Jameson, Xander, and Nash–on a wild goose chase for answers. Barely dodging attempts at her life and remaining in the public eye as a spectacle; Avery does her best to solve the next puzzle. Who is her real father? Which Hawthorne will she choose? How will she survive?
The Hawthorne Legacy is a plot driven, dramatic, and fast-paced work, and Barnes is an expert in twisting stories around in the mind of the reader; she lets us believe we’ve almost solved the puzzle before turning it on its head. This worked well in The Inheritance Games, where Barnes got the timing just right, but it didn’t flow in the same way with The Hawthorne Legacy. The former was easy enough to follow, and plot twists were often shocking but rarely confusing. The latter did have great plot twists throughout, but the biggest one was poorly timed. It came in the last few pages of the book, and made the characters’ established motives, and efforts to solve the puzzle, largely irrelevant.
As a sequel to The Inheritance Games, it was somewhat disappointing, but as an independent work, The Hawthorne Legacy was thrilling and left me wanting more. If you’ve already finished the first book and are considering finishing the series, I definitely encourage it. Despite its banal young adult tropes and belated twists, The Hawthorne Legacy is worth the read for its bracing plot and twisting mystery.